Disgusting Departure
This is where he left meIn this maelstrom of lifeThorns tore open his veinsAnd now he haunts this soul gardenSeldom leaving the bergamotWhere he breathed his lastNo longer am I nave of deathFor I...
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a sad and bitter piece, nyriah .... the departure of someone well loved, I'd say ... intriguing use of color, as well ...."And following our will and wind we may just go where no one's been.We'll ride...
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Thank you. His loss pains me still, I suspect it always will.Must Dash! ~Nyriah~ You have to kiss alot of toads before you find a handsome prince. American Proverb You have not lived until you've...
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............how colorfully you paint The Maelstrom of life!........so many lines that hit home with me......."And now he haunts this soul garden""Can I forget running to the hedgeWretching at the...
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mourn the love? mourn the man? Sometimes i just don't know myself...wonderful piece. ...Read More
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Wow! This is an intriguing read...there seem to be layers of meaning in this one...could be read in a number of ways...like the use of colour...adds depth...Just a couple of minor nits...Learning or...
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I find that pain lessens with time.Thank you for your kind comments Raven. (P.S. It's Nyriah--just having problems with my other account, so I'm using this one in the meantime) Bard of Nyriah Must...
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Thank you for reading and commenting!(It's Nyriah...my other account is being a brat) Bard of Nyriah Must Dash! It is much more comfortable to be mad and know it, than to be sane and have one's...
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Thank you soul. and yes, it's both leaning and retching. Thanks for pointing out the typo's. Bard of Nyriah Must Dash! It is much more comfortable to be mad and know it, than to be sane and have one's...
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